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Friday, 31 March 2017

Snot writing

It was gooey,slimy,yucky green stuff.
It looked like a gooey,slimey glue.
It smelt like a soapy lotion or conditioner.
It felt slimy,cold and oily.
It sounded like popping, goopy,splashing,bubbling,
It feel exciting,happy and nervous.
It smells like lotion
It smelt gross green paint stuff.
It looked like green dishwashing liquid and green sunscreen.
It looked like lotion,oil,glue and green paint.
It felt like green slime slowly going down on my hands.
It felt slippery and soft.

2 comments:

  1. i read the sentence its a pretty good one. i liked how you did it in different lines.
    i see how you felt about snot!

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  2. Loreen You Describing The Snot Was Well.
    Even As I Wasn't There To Play With The Slimey Snot But I Here I Still Can Comment On Your Snot Writing And I Say Have A Snot-Tastic Day.

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