Wind is so cold and the air blow and flow and the dry leaves at the ground is going up to the air and your hair is so messy is like you're riding a super fast roller coaster and it’s cold .Wind is cold and sometimes cloudy and sunny.
By Loreen
Friday, 23 June 2017
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hi my name is Libby i like how you said Wind is so cold and the air blow i hope i cud do that one day
ReplyDeleteHi Loreen, I really like your writing that is about wind. I makes me feel like I'm running down a hill when it's windy.I like how you are explaining what wind is and how it feels and telling us that wind is cold. Here is my blog site if you want to see my blog! http://awahonoleahm.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteKind regards Leah from Awahono School.