My Hiding spot
- First you go to the dark place or to the quiet place.
- Second you need to be quiet to your hiding spot.
- I'm not going to the other people hiding spot .
- And you don't need to go to the small and thin place.
- You can hide to the close place.
I Go Under desk and Behind the tree.
By Loreen
Maybe That Isn't A good Hiding Spot!
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Hi Loreen, My name is Kaedun and I go to St. Bernadette's school. I know that your hiding spot is quite a good spot. I think you need to work on your punctuation and that the writing is a little big, It is like the felling that the sound of loudness caught you and your as still as a stone. I Hope to see your next presentation again.
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